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I agree on the reflection being a bit more faded, however, since the rest of your scene is quite "bright" (lighting is) I think the reflection is best suited like it is. As we all know, the more light, the clearer the reflection would be. Therefore, I think it's right how it is, but then from a personal point of view, I don't like reflections to be that clear. So having a bit more fade would be nice (to me). But as I say, that's just a personal preference. One other thing that's odd is, the florals aren't being reflected.. Not sure why that is. But then, with your quote saying about mistakes, you could quite happily pretend like you did it on purpose. So, it could basically be like a statement being put through in your piece. Not sure if you had already thought of that for the floral reflection "error". If not, I think you should  Another thing I think would look better is making the text slightly 3D. I'd suggest putting it so we can see the 3D on the left side. And by slight, I literally do only mean slight. Other than those few things, I like it.
Last Edit: Nov 21, 2010 19:02:30 GMT by Stinky666
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The reflection isn't very good, but the idea is nice. The glow on the floral designs is much to strong to be on a pure black background, and the subtext is blurry.
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