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New work. Comments explain all.

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Apr 23, 2010 12:55:02 GMT @newfieldgrafix said:
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tbh, i think scorpian is talking out his arse.
I'd be looking into someone's own webdesigns if their going to lecture you on what is "bad".

The layout is great minimal web design, the only thing i would personally change is the sphere that the PM ammount sits on, i'd make it a bit more flat looking.
Good job man (y)



C'mon man, we're all friends here.

Except Fredy.
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Still like this except the search bar. :)
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At the end of the day, we're all going to have to face something, no matter what each party and leader says about how they're going to cut the budget deficit. Public spending will have to be cut, it's just a matter with all of them of cutting it in areas where it will be least noticed.

Neither Brown, Cameron or Clegg will be able to pull us out of the recession with significant spending cuts. Labour can't be re-elected, they've been in too long and they've helped us get into enough mess as it is.

Cameron is just focusing on his adversaries' weaknesses, not his strength, which really annoys me. The only reason he was so popular for a while before the debate was that people thought he was the only other way of getting rid of Gordon Brown, then Clegg came along.

Clegg performed well and actually his policies sound the best, and if I could vote I'd vote for him purely because the other two are way too big for their boots. At least that's my view on things.
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Looks so amazing, but I'm not buying it, too expensive. :P
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<3 C&P

The end result is OK. It's nothing amazing, but we're all still beginners so I don't think we can expect to produce anything really good. The first thing that strikes me is the meteor type thing there which I really don't like, it doesn't fit in with the rest of the piece and looks out of place, that area needs a lot of work.

The background is the next, it's really undeveloped. The clouds are really simple and the easy option for making nebulae, maybe try to develop it more, add space dust and even try to paint it. The stars aren't too bad, but they have no twinkle in them and are really flat.

The text isn't too bad, it could maybe do with some texture. In the tutorial you'll notice the text is much more distorted on purpose, not just distorted through warping. I'm not really a fan of the font, you seem to use it for everything, a font with a much more traditional serif would really fit here I think.

In the tut, hopefully you can see the fire is much more textured too. It's also much more layered, with reds and whites in there. Whereas it looks you smudged with a round brush, they smudged with a textured one, inducing that effect.


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Yeah, it's 'Space Art' which is surreal, you should look into it, it's great work. Also thanks for writing that. :)
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Two pieces of work:

iiiPod.deviantart.com/art/Points-Of-View-160598084

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Apr 12, 2010 22:52:02 GMT @newfieldgrafix said:


If we did that in England, we'd end up on a list.


Meh, I'm already on the list. ;)
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Eric and I collaborated on this masterpiece.


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Got any blue ones?


Mines green. :-/
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I have a Wild English Hedgehog. ???
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Right, some proper work, so some proper crit.

First of all, I like the textures of it, it hits me as good and it really works. My main problem with the interface is that the 'head' of the bat looks like another piece of metal just on top of the wings which have been obviously copied and reversed on themselves.

The texture is nice, but it sort of sits on the fence. You don't have full texture or have you gone for sleek. It doesn't really work too well. The white highlighted stroke on the top of the head is good, but I think it stands out too much.

The mouth is well done and really looks like a vent, you used Ax's patterns I believe, and you used it well. The blue parts on the winds are nice, but I think could do with a little more shadow behind them so they really look like they come out of the wings. The eyes like you said need more work because at the moment they look very out of place.

The one thing that really bugs me is the cracks, they are well made, but they don't seem to fit in. The face has no cracks, and it's not grungey enough to warrant them, but maybe that's just me. Another thing that I don't really like is the fact that the wings seem to get lost in the background at the tips. A thing I suggest is making a selection there, the shape of the wing and having a white gradient coming in, radial or linear and setting it on soft light or something, to make it stand out and give some relief to the bat.

Overall, not a bad WIP.
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Last Edit: Apr 8, 2010 10:41:50 GMT by iiPod
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