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Quinine

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May 2007
That's too busy for a logo. For a start, remove the four circles. And remove the 'ait' text in Pait.

Stinky666

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December 2009
If I didn't know that was a "P", I would assume it was possibly a "?".
Maybe it's just how my mind works, but that's what it looks more like to me.

You need to try do something to make the "P" stand out more.

Eric

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November 2005
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If I didn't know that was a "P", I would assume it was possibly a "?".
Maybe it's just how my mind works, but that's what it looks more like to me.

You need to try do something to make the "P" stand out more.


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But then again, its no longer what I created. It's just a simple P inside a triangle.
Last one was better. This one wouldn't scale very well, and you have to consider that logos need to be cross-media. It can't just work for web and not print.

The original one was too busy, but the previous one worked fine. It was simple and effective. I wouldn't worry too much about the P. I thought it was a P, and only after Stinky mentioned it being a ? did I even consider the notion. Also, even if it did, a logo is not literal. It doesn't necessarily have to be anything, so unless it looks outright bad or like something inappropriate, it's fine to leave it.

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February 2011
:: rate 5 ::
Reason:
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Simple and easily read great job!


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