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NinthJake

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This is my first go at a Wordpress template. It is also my first time letting Adobe Kuler decide the colors for me. I am pretty happy with the end result.

C&C please.
www.codedpreview.com/folders/g/326d6cb2/

Tovarisch

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First up, its way to wide. It doesnt fit on the screen im currently using.

The whole thing seems a bit flat : -/
Like, no textures, no gloss or grunge. Im not sure what this style is xP

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First up, its way to wide. It doesnt fit on the screen im currently using.

The whole thing seems a bit flat : -/
Like, no textures, no gloss or grunge. Im not sure what this style is xP


I see both grunge and gloss. Clearly a Web 2.0 site. Main problem with it is, as tov said (he is a good critiquer) its too wide. Also why is it a square the ends abruptly then goes to a light colour?

Another thing is say is put some slight gloss on the nav bar etc.

Decent effort tho, maybe dont use kuler next time cause those kulers disgust me.
:: rate 3 ::


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I wouldnt call the background grunge, and the only gloss i see is on the title.
Using gloss and grunge together is hard to pull off, and im yet to see someone do it, though i havent been looking.
I say, stick to one.
Either way, you dont have enough gloss/grunge, depending on what you want.

With the colour scheme you have chosen, i suggest going with grunge.

NinthJake

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First up, its way to wide. It doesnt fit on the screen im currently using.

The whole thing seems a bit flat : -/
Like, no textures, no gloss or grunge. Im not sure what this style is xP


I see both grunge and gloss. Clearly a Web 2.0 site. Main problem with it is, as tov said (he is a good critiquer) its too wide. Also why is it a square the ends abruptly then goes to a light colour?

Another thing is say is put some slight gloss on the nav bar etc.

Decent effort tho, maybe dont use kuler next time cause those kulers disgust me.


Ok so you guys want more grunge then? I'll try to fix that and remove some of the gloss problems. The width can be fixed in the coding progress I believe.

About bold: Where do you see that?

Thank for the critique guys :]


Last Edit: Feb 6, 2010 11:27:53 GMT by NinthJake

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