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Twerque

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make my way back home when i learn to fly.

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December 2009
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Made to the theme of Watch It Burn - Push Play. I heard the song and had to make this D: Even though it gave me some serious issues :| Like, the white horse. And it's hooves. AWKWARD BLENDING D:

And the horse jumping off the cliff? Yeaah, 'bout that tail and mane ... Torque really hates smudging them out, and can't do it well, so I just did as little as I could and still get away with it. By all right, it should be more fly-ie ... if you get what I mean?
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Toshiru

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June 2010
Concept is marvelous but composition is bad and not convincing. Try creating some shadows for the white horse. Even if it's not SUPER realistic, I think it'll help a bit. And one last thing, try adding some filters to either the horse or the BG to help blend them in (perhaps levels).

Not going to lie but I doubt I can do anything near as good as that.
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Twerque

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December 2009
^^ Thanks. I definitely should do a shadow P: I'm just so godawful at them, y'know.

And for future note, the whole "Serpentina 2380" copyright is because this was for a SIM game I play called Horsephenomena, on which I go by Serpentina and 2380 is my player number.
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Last Edit: Jun 13, 2010 16:09:48 GMT by Twerque
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